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"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"I would once wonder, I would contemplateif it was just to see thee in the beauty of may,for "thou art more lovely and more temparate"!Alas! I would once summer's beauty defy -drunk in thee, for thy to me was untiring;eternal, even death to me would fail to deny.li'l would I know, fate against me conspiring!Now when I watch summers passing by,I search thee in the bright sun, the skies fair.Its then that I realize how foolish was I,To think of thee as my golden summer.No, in a summer's eve, only a nor'wester is thee,that destroys everything - as thee hath destroyed me!
First of all, i request you to neglect any grammatical error (if comes) in this comment. Now come to the point ->
I welcome you in this literature world. You have done justice with this sonnet. Once Shakespeare wrote a sonnet "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?" ,that sonnet was in the context of love and the beauty of beloved. I appreciate this sonnet , because u went in the opposite direction , but the soul of sonnet is unpurtubed and safe. I know , one starts complaining to the nature , when something hurts in his/her heart. But that pain is paid off, if some precious poems come out of it.
No, in a summer's eve, only a nor'wester is thee,
that destroys everything - as thee hath destroyed me!
Beautiful!.
Waiting for the next ---
Vishwa deepak 'tanha'
unpurtubed == unperturbed